I agree with Sarah, looks good. The updates make it easier to read and follow.
Best,
Marc
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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [GNSO-EPDPP2-SmallTeam] For final review - proposed RDRS StandingCommittee Charter
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Looks good!
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Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E
Policy & Privacy Manager
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swyld@tucows.com
Dear All,
As no further feedback was received on the proposed RDRS Standing Committee Charter, we have gone ahead and reorganized the assignment numbering as suggested by Sarah (see
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IFmCY1xEtWy7IoyM-uSYiRkzFkc0jLdM/edit). In addition, we’ve suggested updated language in the deliverable section in response to a comment from Marc.
Please have a final look to see if there is anything further that needs to be reviewed or considered. The aim is to submit this to the GNSO Council in time for consideration during its September
meeting (document deadline: 11 September).
Best regards,
Caitlin & Marika