Folks, We appreciate the intense work underway on the Whois Disclosure system. We appreciated the presentation on 8 August, and we are looking forward to the review on 6 Sept at 1400 UTC. Attached is a set of questions and comments Edgemoor Research Institute has prepared in anticipation of the upcoming review. This document may be distributed freely. It is also available via < https://www.edgemoorresearch.org/project-jake/icann/>. Thanks, Steve