Hi folks,

During the last call, Phil suggested a redline of proposed changes

would be desirable. I don't own software of my own that does this. I

also searched for online tools that do this, but couldn't find

anything suitable. But, I did attempt to create such "redline" text

manually, and it's attached as a PDP.

I started with Recommendation 2, since that was the 'easiest' (i.e.

adding 4 words, to restrict things definitively to "trademark and

service mark" rights).

For Recommendation 1, I reordered and rephrased the existing

recommendation slightly, for clarity. I also added the text that I

thought should be in a recommendation that no specific new DRP be

created for IGOs.

Since some would rather keep Recommendation 1 limited only to INGOs, I

then offered an alternative, namely adding it into Recommendation 3

instead.

Also, I'm not sure if folks noticed, but some text was deleted from

Recommendation 3, compared to what appeared in January 2017. I pointed

out phrases that we might want to put back, for clarity.

I also found a possible error in how Recommendation 3 was worded,

relative to the comparable text from January 2017. Back in January

2017, there was some text after a semi-colon (i.e. a separate

thought), that somehow got merged now into the prior text, without any

semi-colon. So, it doesn't make sense anymore to me. This stuff was

non-controversial (i.e. the assignee, licensee, agent procedural

guidance), but it kind of got mixed up with other text that was after

the semi-colon.

Sincerely,

George Kirikos

416-588-0266