i've developed an alternate version of the draft that captures my understanding of the "narrow, time-limited" definition of the SCI. i'm putting it out here for discussion, partly to see if my understanding is correct and partly as an alternative for the group to consider.

with the exception of one nit-pick in the "Working Method" section, all of my changes are in the "General" section. Much of what i've done involved deleting prior changes -- so you may find it helpful to have Julie's draft and this one open side by side as you review it. i decided to treat this as a "fork" in the drafts rather than trying to pile my changes on top of the ones that were already there -- it started to get VERY busy. if people would prefer, i'm happy to do a draft that makes the changes "on top" of the ones that Avri and J Scott had already made.