Dear all,

Following Monday’s call, please find attached the updated public comment review tool as well as a one-page summary of comment 28 by Arthur Zonnenberg and the related comment by ICANN Compliance. Those text passages that I paraphrased are marked as such.

I would like to encourage you to have a read through them in preparation for Monday’s call, sparing James (or me) the need to read through them on the call :)

Many thanks and very best wishes,
Lars