Regarding Section 1.3.2(b) of Foundational Issues, the following draft from the Initial Report seems a bit biased to me, especially as to the paraphrasing of the GAC Advice in the highlighted
language:
In October 2012, the Governmental Advisory Committee (GAC)
provided advice to the ICANN Board of Directors of
ICANN that it should come up with a mechanism to incorporate certain commitments, business plans, registration restrictions, additional rights protection mechanisms and other objectives
in the Base Registry Agreement such that they could be overseen by ICANN’s compliance department. In response to the GAC, the New gTLD Program Committee of the Board proposed a new Specification
11 to the Base Registry Agreement to transform application statements into binding contractual commitments,
I believe the focus of the GAC Advice was consumer protection - not approval of business plans and adding RPMs as stated in the draft. The actual GAC Advice with respect to Category 1 Safeguards
was as follows:

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From: Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org]
On Behalf Of Steve Chan
Sent: Friday, June 08, 2018 3:10 PM
To: gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org
Subject: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Proposed agenda - New gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG - 12 June 2018 at 03:00 UTC
Below, please find the proposed agenda for the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG meeting scheduled for 12 June 2018 at 03:00 UTC, for 90 minutes.
For Item 3, the relevant documents are attached. As a reminder, please note that a resource page has been set up on the Wiki to track the distribution of Initial Report sections, which you
can find here: https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB. As
you can see in the link, the following sections have been released:
1.2: Overarching Issues
1.3: Foundational Issues
1.4: Pre-Launch Activities
1.5: Application Submission
1.6: Application Processing
1.7: Application Evaluation/Criteria
1.8: Dispute Proceedings
1.10: Contracting
1.11: Pre-Delegation
1.12: Post-Delegation
Those signed up as Members to this PDP WG should have received meeting information from the SOAC Support team. If you did not receive these participation details or if you would like to send your apologies, please contact the SOAC
Support team (gnso-secs@icann.org).
Best,
Steve
Steven Chan
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