Dear Jon,

Thanks for your suggested edits. They have been worked into the working draft as redlines, which you and the rest of the WG will see when the next version is released in the near future.

Best,

Steve

From: Jon Nevett <jon@donuts.email>
Date: Monday, October 8, 2018 at 8:59 PM
To: Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org>
Cc: "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Proposed agenda - New gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG - 8 October 2018 at 15:00 UTC

Thanks all for the conversation on these drafts about 12 hours ago.  As promised, attached are some suggested changes to Sections 1.1 and 1.2 to clarify the reality of the various positions.  Best, Jon