Thanks Steve, I agree, staff or chairs should “hold the pen” and incorporate agreed upon language and changes. Otherwise our document will turn into Jackson Pollock’s White, Red and Black. Elaine Pruis Senior Director Naming Operations and Policy epruis@verisign.com<mailto:epruis@verisign.com> 703.948.4672 [signature_510382353] From: Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org> Date: Thursday, July 23, 2020 at 1:16 PM To: Jim Prendergast <jim@GALWAYSG.COM>, Julie Bisland <julie.bisland@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org> Cc: "gnso-secs@icann.org" <gnso-secs@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Post Call | New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Working Group | Thursday, 23 July 2020 at 03:00 UTC Hi Jim, all, Staff has created a separate version that retains Paul’s redlines (here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10-4Ihe76XexR_4WcodSnxBlEiJAS3tMw6_i0wY9M...) and in turn, rejected the suggestions that Paul made in the main document (here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X8F8zHkgMzQg2WqGHpuoEP78rhpDkFOjD2qKrZZz...) for ease of review. From the staff perspective, we think it may be more productive if WG members try and reach alignment on the principle components of a proposal rather than preparing competing redlines. Best, Steve From: Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Jim Prendergast <jim@GALWAYSG.COM> Date: Thursday, July 23, 2020 at 9:34 AM To: Julie Bisland <julie.bisland@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org> Cc: "gnso-secs@icann.org" <gnso-secs@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Post Call | New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Working Group | Thursday, 23 July 2020 at 03:00 UTC I believe Anne also asked for this on the call but could we get a copy of Proposal 5 before Paul made edits to the document. Or a clean copy with Paul’s edits below it? Would be easier for some of us to compare the changes and suggest our own without making changes to the master version. If I make any suggestions or changes, I’ll create my own version and circulate via email for all to see. thanks Jim Prendergast The Galway Strategy Group +1 202-285-3699 From: Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Julie Bisland Sent: Thursday, July 23, 2020 12:55 AM To: gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org Cc: gnso-secs@icann.org Subject: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Post Call | New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Working Group | Thursday, 23 July 2020 at 03:00 UTC Dear all, All recordings for the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures Working Group call held on Thursday, 23 July 2020 at 03:00 UTC can be found on the agenda wiki page <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1FuMyD8UifwhaMbQu28ThQ9OhpvuasiaCNQsZK5Injpt2nJ...> (attendance included) and the GNSO Master calendar <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_group-...> . These include: * Attendance (please let me know if your name has been left off the attendance list) * Audio recording * Zoom chat archive * Zoom recording (including audio, visual, rough transcript) * Transcript As a reminder only members can join the call, observers can listen to the recordings and read the transcript afterwards. Please email gnso-secs@icann.org<mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org> if you would like to change your status from observer to member. For additional information, you may consult the mailing list archives <http://secure-web.cisco.com/1FgEdOUxEmTeEz4vh3STcbpbeyP5uy_FGYI5E5tt_QDq76gR...> and the main wiki page<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1zBgzBUZOEJFGT0akFQFv-P0bTuhoVpLUfmjoxrtksXSyGo...>. Thank you. Kind regards Julie