Hey Ariel et. al,

I've thoroughly reviewed both, I've added several comments and suggestions on both google docs. I think #3 should be ok to move on with if the suggestions are taken into consideration (some might need more discussion). But unfortunately, I think #6 needs a lot more work and I've seen other comments asking for foundational additions (especially given the Chairs' input we got). I'm not sure it's a good idea for us to move forward with it yet given the comments that are already on the document that could potentially open conversations we still haven't had or ways of presenting this Improvement that we haven't tapped into yet.

Open to speaking further,

Elsa

On Wed, Jul 31, 2019 at 9:48 PM Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> wrote:

Dear All,

This is a gentle reminder that by COB Friday, 2 August, please provide your final input for the following documents:

Improvement #3 (Criteria for joining of new members after a PDP working group is formed or re-chartered):

Main Document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MC1lrSWRs4k5tsI9ldLqnjP-uprgnwhfFZ3lkcjGuXU/edit?usp=sharing
Working Group Member Skills Guide: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14uAsBg0_BnhJ6nqjitsHutm1AcFKhRsa4VAsR-WtMKI/edit?usp=sharing

Improvement #6 (Document expectations for WG leaders (Chairs/Co- Chairs/Leads) that outlines role & responsibilities as well as minimum skills / expertise required): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eXvC1nKduz-GPDaf9ptx5a3r2ooSHIwnENsz-kM3zVw/edit

In absence of concerns/objections by the Finalization Target Date of 07 August, staff will coordinate with the Small Team leads to produce a clean version, and Improvements #3 and #6 documents will be considered as finalized according to the timeline/implementation plan.

Best Regards,

Ariel

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