Hello everyone,

As discussed on the WG call earlier this week and as reflected in the latest version of our Work Plan (attached), we are sending you the latest version of the Disclosure Framework document and associated Annex, in the hope that between now and our next call we can iron out the remaining points of difference or uncertainty, especially on Section III.C and the Annex. In these latest versions, we have accepted the changes up to and including those that were presented for WG discussion up to this past Tuesday (including on attestation); you will see that we have also done the following:

Moved up the automation language (with a slight tweak to the “human review” phrasing to reflect the WG discussion of 7 April);
Retained the last version of the language in III.C(2) & (3) as well as added – as an alternative for discussion – Val’s latest suggested language for the same;
Used Todd’s latest suggestion (with a slight change to the pretext phrasing) in III.C(5); and
Tried to clarify the Annex in line with the WG discussion this week.

Please use these latest documents in continuing the on-list discussions and in preparation for our next WG call on Tuesday.

Thanks and cheers

Mary

Mary Wong

Senior Policy Director

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)

Telephone: +1 603 574 4892

Email: mary.wong@icann.org