Hi All,
I am sorry to share that the language Chris introduced, and
that the WG accepted, does not appear to have made it into the
final version despite circulation of this language. I trust we
can correct this, and I am working on line edits. I also
support Holly's changes.
Best,
Kathy
On 12/7/2015 11:23 AM, Mary Wong
wrote:
Hello everyone,
Please find attached the marked-up version of our Final
Report, showing the changes that were made to the last
version circulated on 20 November. As noted previously,
the changes are those that were distributed by email on 1
December as reflecting the new language of certain WG
recommendations in the Executive Summary of the Final
Report (and with corresponding language changes made to
Section 7 where these recommendations are repeated
verbatim).
We are continuing to proof-read and format the final
clean document, so there may still be a few minor typos
and formatting/spacing issues in the attached. However,
the co-chairs thought it would be useful for everyone to
get to see all the changes that have been made to the
Final Report in a single document prior to the deadline
later today.
Thanks and cheers
Mary
Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and
Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1-603-5744889
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