Hi All,
I am sorry to share that the language Chris introduced, and that the WG accepted, does not appear to have made it into the final version despite circulation of this language. I trust we can correct this, and I am working on line edits. I also support Holly's changes.
Best,
Kathy

On 12/7/2015 11:23 AM, Mary Wong wrote:

Hello everyone,

Please find attached the marked-up version of our Final Report, showing the changes that were made to the last version circulated on 20 November. As noted previously, the changes are those that were distributed by email on 1 December as reflecting the new language of certain WG recommendations in the Executive Summary of the Final Report (and with corresponding language changes made to Section 7 where these recommendations are repeated verbatim).

We are continuing to proof-read and format the final clean document, so there may still be a few minor typos and formatting/spacing issues in the attached. However, the co-chairs thought it would be useful for everyone to get to see all the changes that have been made to the Final Report in a single document prior to the deadline later today.

Thanks and cheers

Mary

Mary Wong

Senior Policy Director

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

Email: mary.wong@icann.org

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