Hello again everyone – please accept my apologies for this second note. Having discussed with the WG co-chairs what they would like to see on the WG meeting agenda for tomorrow, I’m going to suggest that I circulate the proposed draft text today to the full WG, with the clear caveat that it has not been signed off on by the Sub Team but rather is staff’s attempt to capture the Sub Team’s and WG’s conclusions in the form of text that can be inserted into the WG’s Final Report.

Please let me know if you have any objections to this suggestion – thanks so much!

Cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
Email: mary.wong@icann.org


From: Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org>
Date: Monday, September 21, 2015 at 17:29
To: <gnso-ppsai1@icann.org>
Subject: Proposed draft text for WG Final Report on Sub Team 1 recommendations

Dear all,

The WG co-chairs have asked if we can circulate some proposed draft text to the full WG that incorporates and reflects the Sub Team’s analysis and WG conclusions following our last report. I have prepared the attached document that is a redline/markup of the original text from the Initial Report. The idea is that, once this text is finalized, it will be inserted into the Final Report as an update to what was put out for public comment.

Please let me know if you have any objections to my circulating the attached document to the WG, preferably before the call tomorrow if that’s possible. If you have suggestions for improvements, please let me know as well. Thank you!

Cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4889