Darcy,
This looks great. Thank you for your efforts.
I’ve been working on some edits/revisions as well and hope to forward them to the list by tomorrow.
Best,
Sara
Hi, all!
In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning. I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done. I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview.
I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense. Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily
see what changed.
Please let me know if there are any questions.
Thanks,
Darcy