Darcy,

This looks great.  Thank you for your efforts.  
I’ve been working on some edits/revisions as well and hope to forward them to the list by tomorrow.

Best,

Sara

From: <gnso-ppsai3-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Darcy Southwell
Date: Friday, August 21, 2015 at 2:44 PM
To: "gnso-ppsai3@icann.org"
Subject: [Gnso-ppsai3] Revised Subteam 3 Summary with Overview

Hi, all!

In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning.  I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done.  I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview.

I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense.  Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed.

Please let me know if there are any questions.

Thanks,
Darcy