Sorry Holly, I must have missed the email with your edits. If you could kindly add them into the text, that would be great!
RE: the last call, I was referring to the Subteam 3 call... about a week ago, I think.

To Todd: I'll be back in touch later tonight. In the midst of packing for a trip to see my parents before the summer is over...

Best,
Kathy

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Hi Kathy

Great job.  

First - I did suggest some changes to the first paragraph - I gather you aren’t happy with them?

Next - you refer to the ‘last call’.  Is that the full PPSAI or one just for Subteam 3
Thanks
Holly
On 27 Aug 2015, at 7:16 am, Kathy Kleiman <Kathy@kathykleiman.com> wrote:

Hi All,
Tx to Darcy for the Overview work.  I've taken her draft and added to it my work on Section III as promised on the last call. I added more quotes from commenters seeking court orders and the use of existing legal due process mechanisms prior to disclosure of proxied data. There was a wide array of comments on this issue, including from ISPs, individuals, organizations, and companies.

I used Darcy's version as the base. Both her edits (Overview) and my edits (Section III) are shown in "track changes."

Best,
Kathy

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Hi, all!
In follow up to our call earlier this week, attached is an updated Sub-team 3 analysis draft with the overview added at the beginning.  I redlined my changes so you can clearly see what I’ve done.  I hope you find that I present a clear and accurate overview.

I also made some minor revisions to Section V (“Comments that did not fit neatly into any of the above categories”) that I realized after submitting my original draft of that section made a bit more sense.  Again, I’ve redlined the changes so you can easily see what changed.

Please let me know if there are any questions.

Thanks,
Darcy


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