I'm resending Vicky's message and document, as requested. I realize time is short but as noted previously the WG chairs had requested that the sub team should send their report to the WG by this weekend so that WG members have a chance to review before Tuesday, especially since there was no opportunity to discuss the sub team's work last week. Thanks abs cheers Mary Sent from my iPhone Begin forwarded message: From: Victoria Sheckler <vsheckler@riaa.com<mailto:vsheckler@riaa.com>> Date: October 2, 2015 at 20:28:12 EDT To: Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org>>, "gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>> Subject: RE: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments Please see attached. I tried to shorten the draft, make it more neutral, and raised concerns with some of the recommendations. I still think it is quite duplicative, with the same comment/concerns raised in more than 1 category, but I didn’t remove those since I assume its based on how we categorized the comments in the template. From: gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Mary Wong Sent: Friday, October 2, 2015 7:59 PM To: gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments Thanks, Kathy and everyone. I realize it’s late for all now, but the WG co-chairs have asked me to request that, if at all possible, can the Sub Team send around its report by tomorrow? My sense is that they are asking on the understanding that the summary report is likely to run to quite a few pages long, and hasn’t yet been seen by the WG despite the intention to have presented it earlier this week. If it will help, the Sub Team can agree to send a version of the document that is subject to the caveat that it hasn’t yet been fully reviewed by all, and may not represent the consensus views of the whole Sub Team (as has been done for other Sub Teams). Thanks and cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> From: <gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com<mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com>> Date: Friday, October 2, 2015 at 14:19 To: "gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>" <gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>>, "Paul D. McGrady" <PMcGrady@winston.com<mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments Hi Mary, As you can see, we are still gathering edits and comments. All, Could you get the edits in to me and Paul by COB today? Best, Kathy : Thanks, Kathy, Paul and everyone - just let me know if/how staff can assist in getting the report (even if it is to be “subject to further Sub Team 4 review”, for instance) to the WG. If it is at all possible, it will be great if we can send it to the WG by today, so that they will have the chance to review what’s a pretty long document more fully before Tuesday! Stephanie, we hope you feel better soon! Cheers Mary Mary Wong Senior Policy Director Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: +1 603 574 4889 Email: mary.wong@icann.org<mailto:mary.wong@icann.org> -----Original Message----- From: <gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "McGrady, Paul D." <PMcGrady@winston.com><mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com> Date: Thursday, October 1, 2015 at 15:39 To: Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca><mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> Cc: "gnso-ppsai4@icann.org"<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> <gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Gnso-ppsai4] Fwd: Subteam 4 draft report - final call for comments I'm in the air finally heading back to Chicago. I will look this over tomorrow and get you any comments I may have in your comments in my comments! 😀 Sent from my iPhone On Oct 1, 2015, at 12:16 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca<mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca><mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.c<mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> a><mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca>> wrote: I am afraid I am very ill, and not focusing on work. Trying to get rid of a very very bad cold prior to Dublin.... SP On 2015-10-01 15:08, Kathy Kleiman wrote: Hi All, Just a re-check to see if anyone has any changes before our Subteam 4 report goes out to the full WG for first (and perhaps last) presentation of analysis and action items? Best, Kathy -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: Subteam 4 draft report Date: Tue, 29 Sep 2015 16:04:16 -0400 From: Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com><mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com><mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com><mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com> To: gnso-ppsai4@icann.org<mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org><mailto:gnso-ppsai4@icann.org>, McGrady, Paul D. <PMcGrady@winston.com><mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com><mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com><mailto:PMcGrady@winston.com> Hi All, Tx to Paul for his work! Yesterday, Paul shared with me the edited draft report. He edited the findings and drafted the text for our "recommendation boxes." I really appreciate all he has done - this is hard work! I have now reviewed and added my thoughts and edits to the proposed recommendations. Both Paul and I used "track changes" so all is there to see and review. 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