Hi Alex, 

I added a few points to the document. 

Susan 

On Fri, Mar 2, 2018 at 11:42 AM, Deacon, Alex <Alex_Deacon@mpaa.org> wrote:
Thanks Andrew for your input - it is appreciated.

If anyone has any input please try to send ASAP - or by first thing Monday morning at the latest.    I'll take it in any form and will incorporate/merge into our draft.

Thanks!
Alex




-----Original Message-----
From: Gnso-rds-pdp-2 <gnso-rds-pdp-2-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Andrew Sullivan <ajs@anvilwalrusden.com>
Date: Friday, March 2, 2018 at 10:34 AM
To: "gnso-rds-pdp-2@icann.org" <gnso-rds-pdp-2@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-2] ICANN61 Prep Assignment - Domain Name Control and Individual Internet Use

    I don't have word here, so I hope this formatted ok.  I put some
    things into the template.  This is almost certainly my last
    contribution before PR because I'm completely pegged from now until I
    leave on Wednesday (DNS-OARC is before ICANN).

    A

    On Wed, Feb 28, 2018 at 09:07:29PM +0000, Deacon, Alex wrote:
    >
    >
    > Drafting Team 2,
    >
    >
    >
    > As those who were on the RDS WG call on Tuesday heard, we have decided to take
    > a week to prep for ICANN61 by working on a specific assignment in drafting team
    > mode.
    >
    >
    >
    > Our team’s assignment is to reexamine our past output on Domain Name Control
    > and Individual Internet Use.  As a reminder the final output of your team can
    > be reviewed at
    >
    >
    >
    > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcommunity.icann.org%2Fdownload%2Fattachments%2F74580010%2F&data=02%7C01%7CAlex_Deacon%40mpaa.org%7C5590bd1589e8407f492508d5806c10ea%7C17e50b56d5dd439b962acc7ecd9ab7fe%7C0%7C0%7C636556124810583005&sdata=giHv%2FSzJcgp1WHAJhQ6lYAfBgFHEpMPIQ%2BjlfJWmPSY%3D&reserved=0
    > RDS%20WG%20DT2%20Draft%20edits%201113.pdf
    >
    >
    >
    > We have now been asked to answer the following questions more explicitly and
    > conceptually:
    >
    >  1. Who associated with the domain name registration needs to be identified and
    >     /or contacted for each purpose?
    >  2. What is the objective achieved by identifying and/or contacting each of
    >     those entities?
    >  3. What might be expected of that entity with regard to the domain name?
    >
    >
    >
    > To prep for ICANN61, it is imperative that we discuss these questions and
    > produce output over the next week – ideally by 5 March but no later than 7
    > March.
    >
    >
    >
    > We know this is a tall order, give a short timeframe. However, the leadership
    > believes that this will help us use our F2F time at ICANN61 more effectively,
    > which I hope we all agree would be a terrific idea.
    >
    >
    >
    > I’ve attached a template for us to use in answering these questions.   I hope
    > to propose some answer to these questions later today but given the time crunch
    > I wanted to send this email (and the template) to the team sooner rather than
    > later.
    >
    >
    >
    > To learn more about this assignment, please read these instructions:
    >
    > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcommunity.icann.org%2Fdownload%2Fattachments%2F79432608%2F&data=02%7C01%7CAlex_Deacon%40mpaa.org%7C5590bd1589e8407f492508d5806c10ea%7C17e50b56d5dd439b962acc7ecd9ab7fe%7C0%7C0%7C636556124810583005&sdata=zAly3jAVA5k4DU0PEy7lHznjtQwFSq4o0kllsIjC1u0%3D&reserved=0
    > Drafting%20Team%20Assignment%2026%20Feb.pdf
    >
    >
    >
    > If you were unable to attend today’s WG call, please catch up by reading or
    > listening to the call recording/notes/transcript:
    >
    > https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fcommunity.icann.org%2Fx%2FoAu8B&data=02%7C01%7CAlex_Deacon%40mpaa.org%7C5590bd1589e8407f492508d5806c10ea%7C17e50b56d5dd439b962acc7ecd9ab7fe%7C0%7C0%7C636556124810583005&sdata=naBWJ1B8u013J%2BNZWaw7Aj1NkCfcAb2cjiom0zhMv0k%3D&reserved=0
    >
    >
    >
    > To get started, please ask any questions you may have about this assignment
    > within the next 24 hours.
    >
    >
    >
    > If you have any suggested edits or additions or deletions to the attached first
    > draft, even better!  I encourage you to share them in reply to this message,
    > copying the DT mailing list gnso-rds-pdp-2@icann.org
    >
    >
    >
    > Thanks for doing what you can to help this drafting team come through on this
    > new assignment.
    >
    >
    >
    >
    >


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