Lisa, thank you for taking this on!

I looked through your draft and I think it looks great. The only thing I can think to add is potentially including the example from the privacy proxy situation -- i.e. using the WHOIS to determine how to contact the registrant, if their information is public and, if not, how to contact them either through the privacy proxy or through a legal contact (if necessary). 

Thanks so much :)
Erica

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On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 4:51 PM, Lisa Phifer <lisa@corecom.com> wrote:
DT4 members,

Attached please find version 1 of this drafting team's template with the following sections fleshed out:

Tasks - Absent a volunteer to draft text for this section, I plugged in text here for your feedback by merging tasks enumerated in the EWG report with tasks that were mentioned during our kickoff call earlier this week.

Users - Here I plugged in Erica's draft text, also circulated yesterday to this list

Data - Again, here I plugged in Erica's draft text from her Google sheet

All, please review and comment on the draft text contained in all three sections, either by redlining the attached document or by sending feedback in email messages to this drafting team list <gnso-rds-pdp-4@icann.org>.

Best regards,
Lisa
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