Sam and team,

Attached is a redline containing two updates -

1) the e.g. that Sam suggested, and
2) a one-word change to the single-sentence purpose summary.

The one-word change is to address a request you'll see on the WG mailing list shortly, which is to delete "collected" or "accessed" from the single-sentence summary to defer to full WG deliberation whether each is a purpose for collection or access.

If there are no objections to these two edits by COB today (Friday) I'll post to the full WG mailing list a clean v8.

Thanks all,
Lisa


At 07:32 AM 11/10/2017, Sam Lanfranco wrote:
Thanks Lisa,

I got stuck traveling again and large parts of Canada have no connectivity, which is okay since they are areas with no people, and trees don't have computers.

The only change I didn't manage to sneak in (not that important) was to change the "i.e." to an "e.g." in the Registrant Contact.

Sam

On 11/10/2017 1:02 AM, Lisa Phifer wrote:
Team,

Having seen no specific edits proposed on our mailing list today, attached please find the final clean version of this purpose definition.

Per our plan, I will share with the full WG mailing list Friday, as input to next Tuesday's WG call.

Best, Lisa



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