Rob and all,

Attached is the final redlined version of this drafting team's output.

Drafting team work has already completed, and today was the due date for final output submission. Many if not all of the topics addressed in Rob's comments were already discussed by this drafting team and/or the WG in previous meetings. As such, I believe it would be unfair to other team members to make substantive changes to the team's output without an opportunity for team review and discussion. However, some of Rob's suggested edits appeared to be simple clarifications and likely uncontroversial.

For these reasons, I have applied only simple clarifications (redlined in the attached) in this final redlined version. I left more significant comments for Rob to offer during full WG discussion, as work progresses on refining definitions for all purposes the WG may agree are legitimate.

If any team member has a strong objection to any of the edits redlined in the attached, please raise your objection by 23:00 UTC Saturday. Any edits with objections by that time will be backed out so that the rationale for and against the edit can be discussed in the next pass on all purposes at the full WG level.

I hope you will find this a reasonable compromise which honors the work the team has put into this output so far while still (nearly) meeting the due date for drafting team completion.

Best, Lisa

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