Team 4,

Thanks to Erica and Sam for their suggested edits.

Attached is a proposed-final draft to be submitted (without markups) to the full WG for discussion at ICANN60.

Red text and in-line comments denote changed passages. I also deleted the table from the EWG report that had been included for easy reference.

Please reply to this drafting team list today with confirmation that you agree v5 (clean) is ready to go to the full WG, or propose specific edits you feel are necessary today before sharing with the full WG.

If no changes are agreed by this team as necessary by 24.00 UTC today 25 October, I will relay a clean version of this draft to the WG mailing list and post it on the wiki with other ICANN60 meeting materials.

This team is scheduled to introduce and answer questions about this purpose on Wednesday afternoon at ICANN60. Erica, thanks for volunteering to give that introduction on behalf of the team. I encourage you all to listen into Saturday's F2F session as well, to help everyone better understand all purposes being fleshed out by drafting teams.

Best, Lisa

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