Steve, reviewing this team's email archive:
http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/gnso-rds-pdp-5/
it appears the most recent copy of the document emailed to the team
is:
http://mm.icann.org/pipermail/gnso-rds-pdp-5/attachments/20171024/3691b28b/Subteam5draftincludingpurposedefinitionlanguage9411675-0001.docx
I hope this is helpful,
Lisa
At 09:18 AM 10/25/2017, Metalitz, Steven wrote:
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Could someone provide the link to the current version of the
document? The link previously provided is to an outdated
version. Thanks.
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From: gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org
[
mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bastiaan
Goslings
Sent: Wednesday, October 25, 2017 10:56 AM
To: consult@cgomes.com
Cc: gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-5] Draft Input Document
I tried to give the doc some more structure by following the template
format - I also included my feedback below in the form of comments in the
doc
(No idea what others think, if necessary I can look into this
later/tomorrow)
-Bastiaan
> On 25 Oct 2017, at 18:23,
consult@cgomes.com wrote:
>
> Is anyone able to take all the input and produce a final document
using the template? That will help me determine whether a call is needed
tomorrow. I will not have much time until this evening.
>
> Chuck
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Bastiaan Goslings
[
mailto:bastiaan.goslings@ams-ix.net]
> Sent: Wednesday, October 25, 2017 5:04 AM
> To: Farell Folly
<farellfolly@gmail.com
>
> Cc: Bastiaan Goslings
<
bastiaan.goslings@ams-ix.net>;
consult@cgomes.com; Kris Seeburn
<seeburn.k@gmail.com>;
gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
> Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-5] Draft Input Document
>
> Thanks, Farell
>
> With regard to the current google-doc version (I assume that is what
I need to look at, and that anything else on the list will be
incorporated if applicable - if not then I’m not sure what I can
reflect on):
>
> I am slightly lost when it comes to the structure. As far as I am
aware the Purpose (Name) we are meant to deal with is ‘Regulatory or
Contractual Enforcement’. And the IP example that Steve provided would
then be one Use Case related to this purpose. I do not know who it put
there but as is now the Google doc introduces another purpose on page 2,
i.e. ‘Provide services to clients to provide threat intelligence and
guard against DNS system attacks.’
>
> Besides the fact that I do not understand what ‘providing to
provide’ means, the above IMO does not fit the ‘Regulatory or
Contractual Enforcement’ scope. Just like e.g. CERTS and LEAs do not
fall within our purpose, as was established earlier, so called
’security groups’ and ‘illegal groups’ don’t either
>
> Maybe II am missing something here?
>
>
>> On 25 Oct 2017, at 14:36, Farell Folly
<farellfolly@gmail.com>
wrote:
>>
>> Dear All,
>>
>> In attach a compiled list of data elements that may be required
by a government agency, a regulatory or controlling authority to ensure
contractual compliance. I used the gdpr-dataflow-matrix-whois-11sep17-en
report which was very useful. There is also a good categorization of
users types.
>>
>> I hope it helps us.
>>
>>
>>
>> Le mar. 24 oct. 2017 22:22,
<consult@cgomes.com> a
écrit :
>> I think that will work Bastian as long as you are able to
respond as early as possible tomorrow afternoon your time.
>>
>> Chuck
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Bastiaan Goslings
[
mailto:bastiaan.goslings@ams-ix.net]
>> Sent: Tuesday, October 24, 2017 9:08 AM
>> To: Kris Seeburn
<seeburn.k@gmail.com>
>> Cc: Bastiaan Goslings
<
bastiaan.goslings@ams-ix.net>;
>> consult@cgomes.com;
gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-5] Draft Input Document
>>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Thanks, and sorry for the radio silence - if it works in terms
of our
>> time-/deadline, I can reserve time to look closer at the text
tomorrow
>> afternoon (UTC +4, I’m in Dubai for RIPE75)
>>
>> -Bastiaan
>>
>>
>>
>>> On 24 Oct 2017, at 18:53, Kris Seeburn
<seeburn.k@gmail.com>
wrote:
>>>
>>> I think we just need to read through and accept and properly
incorporate all as one. Let us jus agree what is kept what goes away. I
think time to synthesize and fully agree. Most are fine i think it foes
to fully integrate and agree and the full language to reflect.
>>>
>>> Kris
>>>
>>>
>>>> On Oct 24, 2017, at 18:09,
<consult@cgomes.com>
<consult@cgomes.com>
wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for the great work.
>>>>
>>>> All Please review and comment on the draft with
Steeve’s edits.
>>>>
>>>> Chuck
>>>>
>>>> From:
gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org
>>>>
[
mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Beth Bacon
>>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 24, 2017 6:51 AM
>>>> To: Metalitz, Steven
<met@msk.com>;
gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
>>>> Subject: Re: [Gnso-rds-pdp-5] Draft Input Document
>>>>
>>>> Hi Steve,
>>>> Thanks! Our emails wouldn’t have zipped right past
each other.
>>>>
>>>> I’ll send this version around.
>>>> Thanks,
>>>> Beth
>>>>
>>>> From: Metalitz, Steven
[mailto:met@msk.com]
>>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 24, 2017 9:19 AM
>>>> To: Beth Bacon
<bbacon@pir.org>;
gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
>>>> Subject: RE: Draft Input Document
>>>>
>>>> Thanks Beth. I have dropped into this document the
“Purpose
>>>> definition” language I drafted and which I circulated
a few minutes
>>>> ago. (Apologies that I evidently failed to hit send on
this text
>>>> yesterday!)
>>>>
>>>> <image001.gif>
>>>> Steven J. Metalitz | Partner, through his professional
corporation
>>>> T: 202.355.7902 |
met@msk.com
>>>> Mitchell Silberberg & Knupp LLP |
www.msk.com
>>>> 1818 N Street NW, 8th Floor, Washington, DC 20036
>>>>
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>>>>
>>>> From:
gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org
>>>>
[
mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-5-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Beth Bacon
>>>> Sent: Tuesday, October 24, 2017 8:55 AM
>>>> To:
gnso-rds-pdp-5@icann.org
>>>> Subject: [Gnso-rds-pdp-5] Draft Input Document
>>>>
>>>> Hello All,
>>>> I’ve compiled the edits and contributions into one
word document. I’ve not taken any license to edit and have merely
dropped the original language into the various sections of the template
document and into the chart (one for each use case provided). I’m not
sure if the chart was illustrative in the template or meant to be used in
our inputs, but I do think helps to present the use cases provided in a
visually digestible way.
>>>>
>>>> Go forth and edit!
>>>> Best,
>>>> Beth
>>>>
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