I made what I think are minor edits to the Regulatory purpose document.

 

Chuck

 

From: Kris Seeburn [mailto:seeburn.k@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, October 31, 2017 6:32 AM
To: GNSO-RDS-pdp-5@icann.org
Cc: Chuck <consult@cgomes.com>
Subject: Update to the document we worked on

 

Dear all,

 

I had originally revisited the document we had been working on and had a briefing with Chuck back and forth and we have now broken the document in two as per attached. Your comments are welcomed to improve. If you think we need to add more comprehension to the whole document perhaps one way to revisit is if you want to extrapolate or enlarge the definitions, we might add an appendix to those two documents. Just a suggestion. 

 

Here they are and it is not on googledocs yet and i think Beth is a very good expert on that :)  I am sure we are closer to what the comments were but we are a team and i’ll work along the lines of the team work.