Sara’s redline is more constrained but does it omit our main job, which is to resolve/manage/accommodate/mitigate the divergent and sometimes contradictory interests in RDS which the earlier draft rather succinctly identified? (I realize all those verbs are different, and not sure which is the best.)

If the “core problem” is really to “account for rules, regulations and laws” then should the job be turned over to the GAC which after all represents the sources and authoritative interpreters of those “rules, regulations and laws”? I doubt that would be a satisfactory way to proceed.

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From: gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Andrew Sullivan
Sent: Tuesday, August 23, 2016 9:44 AM
To: gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org
Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement

On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 05:42:17PM +0000, Sara Bockey wrote:
>
> The problem statement should be explicit and to the point, without extraneous wording or viewpoints. Accordingly, my proposed revisions are attached.
>

I think this is vastly better because it is more constrained.

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