to "facilitate" the management of a domain name registration throughout its life cycle?
Stephanie Perrin
Thanks Rob for contributing to our discussion. I inserted some questions after Rob's comments to help us discuss them as a group. All - please see and respond to my comments below. Chuck -----Original Message----- From: gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Rob Golding Sent: Thursday, September 29, 2016 12:10 AM To: gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review - updated RDS Statement of Purpose #1purpose of gTLD registration data is to provide informationprovide seems to be the wrong word, although I'm unsure if store/manage/maintain/record/define are any better [Chuck Gomes] Does anyone, including Rob, have a suggested edit in this regard?about the lifecycle of a domain name (as specified by ICANN’s Diagram of gTLD Lifecycle) to enable management of a domain name registration.I'm struggling with "to enable management of a domain name registration" maybe "enable" should be "assist with" [Chuck Gomes] Does anyone object to this suggested edit or have an alternative one to deal with Rob's concern? #2purpose of a system to collect, maintain, and provide access to gTLD Registration Data (hereafter referred to as “the RDS”) is to provide information that is^ we've already defined it as a systems to "collect, maintain and provide" so the extra "provide" here should probably be "handle" or "manage" [Chuck Gomes] Do members support changing 'to provide information'? If so, which option do you prefer: 1) 'to handle information'; 2) 'to manage information'; 3) some other word?needed by authorized parties to operate a generic top-level domain name in the DNS.^ RDS isn't needed to operate a domain in the DNS perhaps "to operate a generic top-level domain name in the DNS." should just be "regarding a gTLD" [Chuck Gomes] Does anyone object to this edit or have an alternative suggestion? Rob _______________________________________________ gnso-rds-pdp-wg mailing list gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-rds-pdp-wg _______________________________________________ gnso-rds-pdp-wg mailing list gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/gnso-rds-pdp-wg