Dear WG members,

Please find the updated version of Sunrise Recommendation #2 in this google doc here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SmXWvS9M4TAtQ3gC3o4j9-jHaw3uIlWR_2D3lV2vvTU/edit?usp=sharing. This update seeks to incorporate the input provided by WG members on the mailing list and during today’s meeting.

Please note that amendments already agreed by the WG today have been accepted. The current redline edits specifically reflect the following:

• Move the great majority of the Implementation Guidance text into the “context” section (shown in redline).
• Universal change to replace the term “trademark-corresponding domains” with “domains that correspond to trademarks recorded in the TMCH”.
• Clarification of the WG discussion about the question regarding whether any *additional* enforcement mechanism to supplement enforcement actions taken by ICANN Compliance (see redline edits in the final paragraph under “Context”).
• Other editorial changes suggested by David McAuley on list last Friday.  

Please provide your input/suggestion on the mailing list by 16:00 UTC on Thursday, 8 October. The updated language, incorporating any further input from the WG, is expected to be finalized on the coming Thursday.

Thank you,

Mary, Julie, Ariel