Thank you very much Marika. Note that the 'a.' for the first principle under 'Proposed Principles Relating to Implementation' is misplaced. Here is a minor edit to 1.)b under 'Proposed Principles Relating to Implementation': "Administrative updates, error corrections and clarifications to approved GNSO policy should be treated in a transparent manner as implementation issues without any requirement for public consultation except the right to for the community to challenge whether such updates were indeed simply administrative updates, error corrections or clarifications." Here are some suggested edits for footnote 6: "Some possible examples include An example of an impact would be, for example but are not limited to: if new obligations are imposed on parties; substantive changes to burdens such as related privacy, accessibility, rights protections, costs, risks, etc." All the other changes look fine to me. Chuck From: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Friday, February 14, 2014 3:17 AM To: gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl@icann.org Subject: [Gnso-subteam0b-policyimpl] Updated working principles document for review Dear All, Following our call yesterday, please find attached the updated working principles document for your review. Please share any comments / edits you may have ahead of the next meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 20 February at 21.00 UTC. Best regards, Marika