Dear working group members,
As discussed on Tuesday’s call, staff had an action item to provide the draft Initial Report to the Working Group today for review. Please see the draft attached.
Please carefully review this draft Initial Report in coordination with the groups you represent. If you feel that there are items that need to be revised, please enter them
here. For each item, please include:
- Report version (the date listed in the header of the Initial Report draft) and applicable line numbers ( these are listed along the left margin
of the document).
- Name and group you represent: If multiple WG members represent a group, input should be in coordination with these other members.
- Rationale: please provide a clear explanation for why you are proposing the revision.
- Specific proposed revision: Provide the language you would like to see added/removed/edited.
The deadline for submitting input is 14 May 2022. After the deadline, the working group will spend the following four working group meetings reviewing the items submitted in the input
document. If your groups are unable to provide input by 14 May, feedback on the Initial Report can be provided during the public comment period.
As you review, please note that some sections of the report are highlighted:
- Text highlighted in purple is relatively new and should be reviewed closely.
- Text highlighted in orange is still under discussion and may change.
- Yellow highlights are administrative in nature can be ignored.
Please do not hesitate to reach out with any questions about the review process.
Kind regards,
Caitlin, Julie, Berry, and Emily
