Dear Working Group members, As a reminder, please come prepared to discuss the working documents for Recommendation 14<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VOwh3d7bieJI1rDYYYv71CHDfbkkUpVdVt57H8-1...>, 16<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lPqhvP6ekFafgiwu-LOxARL4HxE7Fer2cGTcq_1f...>, and 17<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yTeU5FTqfXt59_JqAewSs0SvNzoObgmZRWDtYYjx...> during our call tomorrow. Additionally, here is a reminder of outstanding homework and the action items from our last meeting: 📣 ACTION ITEMS/HOMEWORK: 📣 1. Working Group Members to review the attached redline revision of the Initial Report reflecting agreed updates to Recommendations 3-9 (see pages 18-24), as well as a strawman draft of the new Recommendation 2 and response to Charter Question A7. The Recommendation 2 strawman is available here [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1e8iG6FmRD0M5V...> by Wednesday, 30 November. 2. Jothan Frakes, Jim Galvin, Jody Kolker, and Rick Wilhelm have volunteered to compile a list of attack vectors and how the recommendations solve for them, or where they are out of scope. 3. Updates to report language: * Recommendation 10: * Concern -- Staff to see where the discussion on the Losing FOA falls and then to tidy up the language in recommendations and rationales. * Proposed edit -- Staff to amend the recommendation per the WG’s discussion. * Recommendation 11: * Proposed edit -- Staff to revise the recommendation either according to the potential next step in the strawman revision of “unset the TAC” or retaining the term “clear” with a definition in a footnote. * Proposed Edit -- Jim Galvin to bring this issue back to the Registry SG for discussion/consideration. * Recommendation 13: * Proposed edit -- Staff to update the language to “Registry” from “Registries”. * Proposed edit -- Staff to revise the language according to the Strawman revision suggested in the Potential next step. * Proposed edit -- Staff to revise the language according to the Strawman revision suggested in the Potential next step, except to change to “reset the TAC to null.” * Question to the community regarding management of TTL: Jim Galvin, Rick Wilhelm, Jothan Frakes Jody Kolker, and John Woodworth to meet to discuss the public comments and come back to the group with a proposal. Thank you for your attention to this homework as we continue the review of public comments. Best regards, Emily, Julie, Berry, and Caitlin From: GNSO-TPR <gnso-tpr-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org> Date: Thursday, November 17, 2022 at 1:41 PM To: "gnso-tpr@icann.org" <gnso-tpr@icann.org> Subject: [GNSO-TPR] Proposed agenda for meeting #68 on Tuesday November 2022 at 16:00 UTC Dear Working Group members, Please find below the proposed agenda for the next meeting scheduled to take place on Tuesday 22 November 2022 at 16:00 UTC. Prior to the call, please review the documents linked in the agenda below. Kind regards, Julie, Berry, Caitlin, and Emily Transfer Policy Review - Meeting #68 Proposed Agenda 22 November 2022 1. Roll Call & SOI updates 2. Welcome and Chair Updates 3. Terminology Updates: Whois – Recommendation 14 (Public Comment Review Tool<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/201949311/gnso-TPR-P1A-pcrt...> and Public Comment Working Document [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1VOwh3d7bieJI1...>) [No comments received on Recommendation 15] 1. Transfer Restriction After Initial Registration – Recommendation 16 (Public Comment Review Tool<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/201949311/gnso-TPR-P1A-pcrt...> and Public Comment Working Document [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1lPqhvP6ekFafg...>) 2. Transfer Restriction After Inter-Registrar Transfer – Recommendation 17 (Public Comment Review Tool<https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/201949311/gnso-TPR-P1A-pcrt...> and Public Comment Working Document [docs.google.com]<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/1yTeU5FTqfXt59...>) 3. AOB