Hello Pilot Holistic Review ToR Team Members, Please find proposed revisions to the objectives section of the ToR document here<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jdQXE2VPicshH594WDraE8dWL2ZQLa7i/>, starting in the middle of page 4. These revisions are based on the proposal put forth in the thought paper<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GNuyQChCdRu_hb8Y01ufHMirZNG0M3FH/>. We are also in the process of drafting proposed revisions to the deliverables so that they align with the proposed objectives. Please review these revisions and prepare comments accordingly. Thank you, Jason Jason Kean Project Manager, Review Support and Accountability Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org>