Naela – thanks for the draft.  I would, however, point out that the audience for this document is not just PTI and the CSC.  Given that it is a new SLA, and the first new one at that, it will need to be posted for public comment as well as be approved by the GNSO and the ccNSO.  So the more that it can be made understandable by non-technical lay people the less difficulty we will have in getting it through.  Might I suggest including an explanation of just what the LGRs are and how they relate to IDNs.  I have made a few other minor suggestions in the attached.

Thanks

Allan  

From: ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Naela Sarras
Sent: Tuesday, April 9, 2019 5:34 PM
To: ICANN-CSC@icann.org
Subject: Re: [ICANN-CSC] CSC Kobe Meeting: Recording, Notes, & Action Items

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Dear colleagues,

Please find attached a draft document for action item “Action 06 28 2019: PTI to update documentation around update specific Service Level Agreement (the template) and for LGR”.

Best regards,

Naela

From: ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>
Date: Tuesday, April 2, 2019 at 6:55 AM
To: "ICANN-CSC@icann.org" <ICANN-CSC@icann.org>
Subject: [ICANN-CSC] CSC Kobe Meeting: Recording, Notes, & Action Items

Dear CSC,

Please find the notes attached from the CSC Public Session in Kobe. AC recording and action items below.

Adobe Connect: https://participate.icann.org/p53m7btmv8k/

Action Items

Action 01 28 2019: Staff to circulate CSC Findings to community

Action 02 28 2019: ICANN Org to provide update Implementation of Amended IANA Naming Function Contract

Action 03 28 2019: PTI Staff to introduce proposal for ccTLD create Service Level by May meeting

Action 04 28 2019: Secretariat to ensure that item is on ccNSO meeting days agenda (part of PTI/CSC update slot)

Action 05 28 2019: Secretariat to check how “effective date of change” is defined/structured in amended agreement

Action 06 28 2019: PTI to update documentation around update specific Service Level Agreement (the template) and for LGR

Action 07 28 2019: Secretariat prepare proposal on how to deal with individual complaints for discussion by CSC in April

Action 08 28 2019: Secretariat to propose method to provide on-boarding for next CSC by May meeting

Action 09 28 2019: Staff prepare overview of selection skill set Members and Liaisons to date as starting point for discussion for April meeting

Best,

Ria