Hi Allan,
Thank you for all of your work in putting these decks together. I had one more suggestion in addition to the one that Naela raised below. On slide 12 of the long deck and slide 8 of the short deck, as ICANN,
PTI, and the CSC have been collaborating on the SLA change procedures, it would be good to reflect the collaboration of all three parties in place of the single reference to IANA Functions Operator, which per the IANA Naming Function Contract is ICANN.
Best,
Trang
From: ICANN-CSC <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Naela Sarras <naela.sarras@iana.org>
Date: Wednesday, October 10, 2018 at 7:37 AM
To: Allan MacGillivray <allan.macgillivray@cira.ca>, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "icann-csc@icann.org" <ICANN-CSC@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [ICANN-CSC] CSC Presentation for ICANN Barcelona
Thank you for sharing the updated slides. One feedback on
slide #6 of the short deck and #8 of the long deck, the second sub-bullet points refers to individual complaints. I believe it needs to be adjusted to “escalated complaints.”
•CSC role is limited to:
•monitoring PTI’s overall complaint
management system
•being informed of the status
of individual complaints
Thank you,
Naela
On 10/4/18, 12:04 PM, "ICANN-CSC on behalf of Allan MacGillivray" <icann-csc-bounces@icann.org
on behalf of allan.macgillivray@cira.ca> wrote:
Colleagues – thank you for your comments on the earlier versions of these two decks. I am attaching what I hope will be
the final versions – one named ‘long version’ and the other ‘short version’. To my mind the ‘short version’ is too long, so I would recommended that it alone be used. The ‘long version’ does re-use about five more slides from last year’s deck, which was
the first time that we gave the ICANN community an annual update. The newer members of the CSC in particular may find it useful.
If anyone would like a pdf version, please ask.
Allan MacGillivray