Thank you Dennis. Dear all, I have also done another editing pass, addressing Dennis’ comments and adding a few more for review by everybody. Your input is needed to finalize some of these comments. The Additional notes are now not in order of appearance in the guidelines. I have not fixed them yet as that is an editorial change I can do at the end of the process. Kindly comment on the attached version, if possible. Regards, Sarmad From: Tan Tanaka, Dennis [mailto:dtantanaka@verisign.com] Sent: Saturday, April 28, 2018 12:33 AM To: Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org>; idngwg@icann.org Subject: [Ext] Re: [Idngwg] IMPORTANT: FINAL CALL for IDN Guidelines version 4.0 Some minor edits/comments enclosed. Thanks, Dennis From: Idngwg <idngwg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:idngwg-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org<mailto:sarmad.hussain@icann.org>> Date: Friday, April 27, 2018 at 8:17 AM To: "idngwg@icann.org<mailto:idngwg@icann.org>" <idngwg@icann.org<mailto:idngwg@icann.org>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Idngwg] IMPORTANT: FINAL CALL for IDN Guidelines version 4.0 Dear IDNGWG members, Following the agreement of IDNGWG members on 26 April 2018 on the draft IDN Guidelines, this is the FINAL CALL announcement for any feedback before confirming the “Final Draft of IDN Implementation Guidelines ver. 4.0”. You are all requested to please review the attached document in detail and provide any final feedback by 4 May 2018. As next steps, unless there are substantive changes proposed which are not addressed online, ICANN staff will proceed to finalize the guidelines document and share it with RySG, RrSG, and ccNSO. ICANN staff will also formally send the document to ICANN org for publication and for further processing to implement these guidelines. We look forward to your feedback. Regards, Sarmad