Mohamed
This
is not an updated charter it is a completely re-written charter.
As
such, it moves us backwards, not forwards. I also note that it lacks the
critical language about the ICG’s relationship to the other enhanced
accountability process and thus is non-negotiably unacceptable to my stakeholder
group and, I suspect, to all the other DNS-based representatives. I would
encourage ALAC to start with the draft that we worked on and provide commentary
on those parts that it feels are inadequate, unclear or missing.
--MM
From:
internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On
Behalf Of Mohamed El Bashir
Sent: Friday, August 08, 2014 6:36
AM
Cc: ICG
Subject: [Internal-cg] Charter commenting - ALAC
Comments ( Updated Charter Draft )
Dear Colleagues,
While ICG is finalizing the setup
and publication of charter comments process, which i hope it can be published as
as soon possible.
I would like to provide you with
ALAC comments on the draft ICG charter, ALAC has discussed been discussing the
charter and we are proposing the attached updated charter document.
The current draft charter is a too long document ( 6 pages ),
not easy to ready and could be subject to different interpretations. The
attached ALAC draft is one page only summarizing the charter objectives,
attempting to make it easy to read and digest.
It has contain ALAC comments in the latest charter
draft.
Thanks
Kind Regards,
Mohamed