I propose some revisions to Joe’s document as attached.  (revisions are retained)

Editing team convenes in 30 minutes, but we will focus I think on developing Jari’s presentation into a set of expectations/questions/etc for community submission.

Paul.

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On 18 Jul 2014, at 3:12 am, Paul Wilson <pwilson@apnic.net> wrote:

All,

for those volunteers interested in joining, some of us will gather at 7am (for 7.15) at the breakfast cafe.

My task was to move ahead on the "community expectations”, which will be based on Jari’s presentation.  Jari, you are encouraged to join if you are free.  :-)

Attached text has been provided by Joe, for integration into final documentation (as I understand it).

Paul.



Begin forwarded message:

From: joseph alhadeff <joseph.alhadeff@oracle.com>
Subject: one more addition...
Date: 17 July 2014 11:55:09 pm AEST
To: Paul Wilson <pwilson@apnic.net>

<jha proposal 2.doc>

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