Thanks Alissa for your work on this.  I’m sure we could continue word-smithing this for a long time, and I’m happy to go.

Kavouss’s comment on light:  I like the term as it reminds everyone that we are not planning to play the autocrats.  But if non-native English speakers find the meaning obscure I’m ok without. 

Cheers

Martin

From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Kavouss Arasteh
Sent: 29 August 2014 13:32
To: Daniel Karrenberg
Cc: Coordination Group
Subject: Re: [Internal-cg] RFP - publishable draft?

Dear Alissa,

Dear All,

I suggest some small amendments to make various parts of the text consistent with each other

See attachment

Kavouss  the l

2014-08-29 13:37 GMT+02:00 Daniel Karrenberg <daniel.karrenberg@ripe.net>:

On 28.08.14 23:36 , Alissa Cooper wrote:
> ...

>
> Are there any objections to publishing this as a draft (and having the
> secretariat host it on our web site and make an announcement about its
> existence) by Sept 1?

I support publishing this as a daft with Elise's corrections.

Daniel


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