The draft is acceptable as is - thanks for your work on editing...
I have proposed a few non-substantive edits to improve understanding
- for example use of public comment forum may be read not to include
written comments, propose replacing forum with consultation, etc.
One possible addition might be a reaffirmation of our commitment to
consultation which should be differentiated from our 7 day period
for decisions... Possible language which could be added to making
decisions could be:
ICG
will
make all reasonable efforts to enable member stakeholder
communities
to have appropriate time to consult with their members on issues
on
which the ICG will make substantive decisions.Where appropriate and practicable, public comment periods
will also be
provided
.
Joe
On 9/16/2014 4:40 AM, Kavouss Arasteh
wrote:
I am at another meeting
I have read your edited text which seems to cover most or
almost every points.