Hi Adiel,

Thanks for this.  I have made some edits and comments in dropbox and copied in the attachment here.

Best

Martin

From: internal-cg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:internal-cg-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Adiel Akplogan
Sent: 05 August 2014 21:49
To: ICG
Subject: [Internal-cg] ICG Secretariat Round #2

Dear all,

Attached is a revised version of the document. I have tried to incorporate and consolidate all the comments. I have left out some of the specific references made to tasks/activities in coordination with ICANN staff at this stage as I think we still need to clarifier that aspect and until then we should leave that out of this document. When appointed if we want something to be done with ICANN dedicated supporting staff we will instruct them accordingly. Narelle I have also added in the neutrality and independence aspect in the first paragraph of the requirements. PAF, some of your comments are covered by Paul’s so I did not repeat them.  In any case if I have left anything out feel free to raise.

Thanks.

- a.