Russ’s edits look good to me.

Chuck

From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com]
Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen
Cc: iotf@icann.org
Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter

Thanks Trang and Chuck.  I agree with the changes made by Chuck.

I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck.  Se the attachment.

Russ

On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:

> Thanks Trang.  I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
>
> Chuck
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen
> Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM
> To: iotf@icann.org
> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
>
> Dear IOTF Members:
>
> As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
>
> Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
>
> Regards,
>
> Trang
>
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