Dear IOTF members,

Thank you so much for your comments and feedback. We have incorporated all edits suggested by both Chuck and Russ and reflected in the attached document. This document will be posted for 30-day public comment later today.

Regards,

Yuko

From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck
Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 2:25 PM
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org>
Cc: iotf@icann.org
Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter

Russ’s edits look good to me.

Chuck

From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com]
Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 4:29 PM
To: Gomes, Chuck; Trang Nguyen
Cc: iotf@icann.org
Subject: Re: [IOTF] RZERC Charter

Thanks Trang and Chuck.  I agree with the changes made by Chuck.

I have made two additional changes to the ones proposed by Chuck.  Se the attachment.

Russ

On Jun 1, 2016, at 3:57 PM, Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@verisign.com> wrote:

> Thanks Trang.  I suggested a few edits that I believe are minor in the attached redlined document.
>
> Chuck
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: iotf-bounces@icann.org [mailto:iotf-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Trang Nguyen
> Sent: Wednesday, June 01, 2016 3:43 PM
> To: iotf@icann.org
> Subject: [IOTF] RZERC Charter
>
> Dear IOTF Members:
>
> As mentioned on the last IOTF call, the RZERC term sheet has been turned into a charter. Formatting was applied to put the content into paragraph format rather than table format. Minor wording changes were also made to turn the bullets into complete sentences. There was a request to add some ³whereas² to the charter, however, as that is not typically used in ICANN charter documents, we did not insert any.
>
> Thank you for your input and contributions to this document. ICANN will post this charter for a 30-day comment period this Friday.
>
> Regards,
>
> Trang
>
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