Dear IRT,

In our clean up review to prepare for the Public Comment, we discovered another “drafting error.”

It impacts requirements for Registrar Whois Server data element: collection, transfer, and escrow.

We’d greatly appreciate IRT’s prompt review that are redlined in Sections 6.1, 7.2, 7.4, 8.4, and 8.5.

The explanation for the change was documented as Drafting Error #2.

Rather than adding it at the end, the item was inserted following the order IRT had recommended.

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Review Drafting Error #2: Registrar Whois Server; OneDoc Sections 6.1, 7.1.2, 7,2,1, 8.4.3, 8.5.1

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Kind Regards,

Dennis S. Chang

GDD Programs Director

Phone: +1 213 293 7889

Sykpe: dennisSchang

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