Dear IRT,

The following items include corrections to remove “or generate” and “or collect” in cases where they do not apply.

Also is a deletion for RFC reference where it isn’t needed.

Please see the rotational provided via comment for the changes

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Review OneDoc corrections in section 6.4, 7.2.4, 7.4,

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Thank you for your prompt response as we prepare for the public comment.

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Kind Regards,

Dennis S. Chang

GDD Programs Director

Phone: +1 213 293 7889

Sykpe: dennisSchang

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