Hi Sarah,

Thanks for the question.

You are correct, the text before the box is no longer considered and entirely replaced by the text in the box.

I darkened the text to be replaced and commented for clarity.

Thanks

Dennis Chang

From: Sarah Wyld <swyld@tucows.com>
Date: Monday, April 18, 2022 at 07:41
To: Dennis Chang <dennis.chang@icann.org>, "Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy" <irt.regdatapolicy@icann.org>
Subject: [Ext] RE: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419

Hi Dennis,

Is the text in the box the entire new text, and the text before the box is no longer to be considered? Or does the box replace some of the preceding text?

Thanks,

--

Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E

Policy & Privacy Manager

Pronouns: she/they

swyld@tucows.com

From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy
Sent: April 11, 2022 5:04 PM
To: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy
Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419

Dear IRT,

Thanks for you input on the Addendum II.

Based on your feedback, we’ve revised the wording for better clarity of the implementation requirements.

204

Review Revised Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation [docs.google.com]

20220419

Btw, you’ll note that the next IRT meeting has been rescheduled to next week.

We are currently working to revise the Addendum I and the Section 10; again based on your helpful inputs.

We’ll need a bit more time to formulate the language and a corresponding logic map to facilitate your review.

I’ll send out another IRT task when ready.

Kind Regards,

Dennis S. Chang

GDD Programs Director

Phone: +1 213 293 7889

Sykpe: dennisSchang