IRT Task 143 Review drafting error document 20210407
Dear IRT, Thank you for supporting the ICANN70 IRT session yesterday. I’ve received feedback that it was a productive session thanks to your review and suggestions. As I mentioned briefly at the end of the session, we decided to create a separate document for what we have in Section 5 of the public comment form. These seemed to be easy to understand when we first discussed it but after some time has passed and multiple items are compiled, they are more challenging. Thanks to Sarah’s suggestion to add more details, we added more details with the public readers in mind. Please review and provide your comments. We’ll discuss each one at the IRT meetings to ensure we all understand and agree that these are indeed “drafting errors” rather than disagreement on interpretation of recommendations. 143 Review drafting error document<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1q9I2ZBTkiq8hFOZeWwdYAaiUge3JLFx7/edit#heading=h.d50ek5u7tzlr> 20210407 Please let me know if you’d like more time to review these. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org> One World – One Internet
Thanks Dennis & IPT, this is much more clear and easy to review! -- Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E Policy & Privacy Manager Tucows swyld@tucows.com +1.416 535 0123 Ext. 1392 From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Sent: March 26, 2021 11:36 AM To: Andrea Glandon via IRT.RegDataPolicy Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 143 Review drafting error document20210407 Dear IRT, Thank you for supporting the ICANN70 IRT session yesterday. I’ve received feedback that it was a productive session thanks to your review and suggestions. As I mentioned briefly at the end of the session, we decided to create a separate document for what we have in Section 5 of the public comment form. These seemed to be easy to understand when we first discussed it but after some time has passed and multiple items are compiled, they are more challenging. Thanks to Sarah’s suggestion to add more details, we added more details with the public readers in mind. Please review and provide your comments. We’ll discuss each one at the IRT meetings to ensure we all understand and agree that these are indeed “drafting errors” rather than disagreement on interpretation of recommendations. 143 Review drafting error document 20210407 Please let me know if you’d like more time to review these. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org One World – One Internet
Thanks Dennis & IPT, this is much more clear and easy to review! -- Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E Policy & Privacy Manager Tucows swyld@tucows.com +1.416 535 0123 Ext. 1392 From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Sent: March 26, 2021 11:36 AM To: Andrea Glandon via IRT.RegDataPolicy Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 143 Review drafting error document20210407 Dear IRT, Thank you for supporting the ICANN70 IRT session yesterday. I’ve received feedback that it was a productive session thanks to your review and suggestions. As I mentioned briefly at the end of the session, we decided to create a separate document for what we have in Section 5 of the public comment form. These seemed to be easy to understand when we first discussed it but after some time has passed and multiple items are compiled, they are more challenging. Thanks to Sarah’s suggestion to add more details, we added more details with the public readers in mind. Please review and provide your comments. We’ll discuss each one at the IRT meetings to ensure we all understand and agree that these are indeed “drafting errors” rather than disagreement on interpretation of recommendations. 143 Review drafting error document 20210407 Please let me know if you’d like more time to review these. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org One World – One Internet
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Dennis Chang
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Sarah Wyld