IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419
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Dear IRT, Thanks for you input on the Addendum II. Based on your feedback, we’ve revised the wording for better clarity of the implementation requirements. 204 Review Revised Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVFkoI6RmrVVz--RrVLSOj1bmz1qLb7_JTuvt7At4Uo/edit> 20220419 Btw, you’ll note that the next IRT meeting has been rescheduled to next week. We are currently working to revise the Addendum I and the Section 10; again based on your helpful inputs. We’ll need a bit more time to formulate the language and a corresponding logic map to facilitate your review. I’ll send out another IRT task when ready. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org> One World – One Internet
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Hi Dennis, Is the text in the box the entire new text, and the text before the box is no longer to be considered? Or does the box replace some of the preceding text? Thanks, -- Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E Policy & Privacy Manager Pronouns: she/they swyld@tucows.com From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Sent: April 11, 2022 5:04 PM To: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419 Dear IRT, Thanks for you input on the Addendum II. Based on your feedback, we’ve revised the wording for better clarity of the implementation requirements. 204 Review Revised Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419 Btw, you’ll note that the next IRT meeting has been rescheduled to next week. We are currently working to revise the Addendum I and the Section 10; again based on your helpful inputs. We’ll need a bit more time to formulate the language and a corresponding logic map to facilitate your review. I’ll send out another IRT task when ready. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org One World – One Internet
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Hi Dennis, Is the text in the box the entire new text, and the text before the box is no longer to be considered? Or does the box replace some of the preceding text? Thanks, -- Sarah Wyld, CIPP/E Policy & Privacy Manager Pronouns: she/they swyld@tucows.com From: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Sent: April 11, 2022 5:04 PM To: Dennis Chang via IRT.RegDataPolicy Subject: [IRT.RegDataPolicy] IRT Task 204 Review Revosed Addendum II inOneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419 Dear IRT, Thanks for you input on the Addendum II. Based on your feedback, we’ve revised the wording for better clarity of the implementation requirements. 204 Review Revised Addendum II in OneDoc added for Rec 12 Supplemental Recommendation 20220419 Btw, you’ll note that the next IRT meeting has been rescheduled to next week. We are currently working to revise the Addendum I and the Section 10; again based on your helpful inputs. We’ll need a bit more time to formulate the language and a corresponding logic map to facilitate your review. I’ll send out another IRT task when ready. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org One World – One Internet
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Regrets for today. I will not be able to attend. Thanks, Steve
participants (3)
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Dennis Chang
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Sarah Wyld
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Steve Crocker