Dear IRT, Based on your review and inputs, we’ve revised the language for the two addendums. 208 Review OneDoc Addendum I and II for revised language <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SVFkoI6RmrVVz--RrVLSOj1bmz1qLb7_JTuvt7At...> 20220517 I made the due date a week long since this as a follow-up review for our prior reviews and discussions. However, if you’d like additional time, please let me know to adjust the due date. -- Kind Regards, Dennis S. Chang GDD Programs Director Phone: +1 213 293 7889 Sykpe: dennisSchang www.icann.org<http://www.icann.org> One World – One Internet