Looks fine to me.  There seems to be a typo in the first paragraph of section 2 "for an interim period one NCA appointee would made to each house"
Greg

----- Original Message ----
From: Mark McFadden <mcfadden@ispcp.info>
To: ispcp@icann.org
Sent: Tuesday, September 16, 2008 10:48:55 AM
Subject: [ispcp] Draft statement on gNSO reform implementation issues

Based on the last ISPCP teleconference, a draft ISPCP statement on gNSO reform implementation issues has been produced.  It is attached to this mail message.

 

We need to have comments pretty quickly because the deadline for submitting these comments is almost upon us.

 

Please “reply-all” any comments you might have on this short draft.

 

Thanks for your prompt attention!

 

Mark

 

Mark McFadden

Secretariat, ISPCP