[[--Translated text (es -> en)--]] Subject: Re: =? Iso-8859-1? Q? REMINDER = 3A_Solicitud_de_Come? == Iso-8859-1? Q? Ntarios = 3A_Proyecto_de_At-Large_Declaraci = F3n_de_la_Visi? == Iso-8859-1? Q? = F3n_ -_Fecha_l = EDmite_para_observaciones_17_de_mayo? = From: silvia.vivanco@icann.org Dear Johnny, Pasare to translate the comments into English and also lay it on the WIKI established for this PURPOSE. https://community.icann.org/display/Improve/At-Large+Vision+Statement+as+Pro... I would like to observe the Following: ALAC is the Advisory Committee of At Large, I do not think it is That it Appropriate to place Within the definition of the At-Large community, These are not two Communities, ALAC is born out of the At-Large Community. The text is redundant. THEREFORE, I suggest the declaration to be written as FOLLOWS: The At Large community and catalyzes in an inclusive Manner Facilitates the participation of end users significant of Internet in the world and in a voice ITS Provides Manner significant in all the ICANN issues. Sincerely. Johnny Laureano AUI PERU Silvia Vivanco Manager, At-Large Regional Affairs Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Telephone: + 1 (202) 570-7119 Fax: +1 (202) 789-0104 Cell / Mobile: +1 (202) 735-7011 From: Johnny Laureano [mailto: johnnylaureano@yahoo.com] Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 6:39 PM To: lac-discuss-es@atlarge-lists.icann.org Cc: ICANN At-Large Staff Subject: Re: [lac-discuss-en] REMINDER: Request for Comments: At-Large Draft Declaration of the vision - closing date for comments 17 May Dear Sylvia, The English translation does not reflect what I propose, I would appreciate you an accurate English translation of the Spanish version I make of the vision of the At-Large. Thank you. Johnny --- On Tue, 5/15/12, Johnny Laureano <johnnylaureano@yahoo.com<mailto:johnnylaureano@yahoo.com> > Wrote: From: Johnny Laureano <johnnylaureano@yahoo.com<mailto:johnnylaureano@yahoo.com> > Subject: Re: [lac-discuss-en] REMINDER: Request for Comments: At-Large Draft Declaration of the vision - closing date for comments 17 May To: lac-discuss-es@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:lac-discuss-es@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Cc: "ICANN At-Large Staff" <staff@atlarge.icann.org<mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org> > Date: Tuesday, May 15, 2012, 5:33 PM Dear members of At-Large To observe the following: ALAC is the advisory committee of the At-Large, does not seem relevant to be within the definition of the vision of the At-Large, there are two communities, ALAC comes from the At-Large. Also, there is redundancy in the text. I therefore suggest the vision statement reads as follows: The At Large community catalyst and facilitator in an inclusive manner the significant participation of Internet end-users worldwide and provides a significant voice in all matters of ICANN. Sincerely, Johnny Laureano AUI PERU --- On Tue, 5/15/12, staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org><staff@atlarge.icann.org<http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> > Wrote: From: staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org><staff@atlarge.icann.org<http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> > Subject: REMINDER: Request for Comments: At-Large Draft Declaration of the vision - closing date for comments 17 May To: lac-discuss-es@atlarge-lists.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=lac-discuss-es@atlarge-lists.i...> Cc: "ICANN At-Large Staff" <staff@atlarge.icann.org<http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> > Date: Tuesday, May 15, 2012, 5:12 PM [[- Translated text (in -> en) -]] Subject: REMINDER: Request for Comments: At-Large Draft Declaration of the vision - closing date for comments 17 May From: staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> Dear All, A reminder that perodo comments to the proposed At-Large Visin Declaration is CloseHotel Thursday, May 17. The proposed At-Large Declaration of view is: * The community of ALAC and At Large-catalyzes and facilitates inclusive significant participation of Internet end-users worldwide, the aggregates their contributions and provides his voice to be in all matters of ICANN. Please use the comment function on this < https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ> SUBMIT your comments to At-Large Staff: <mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org<http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> > staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> ~ ~ V. Regards, Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisela Gruber, and Nathalie Peregrine falcon ICANN Staff to support ALAC politics E-mail: <mailto:staff@atlarge.icann.org<http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> > Staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> ~ ~ V From: ICANN At-Large Staff [mailto: staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> ] Posted on: Friday, May 4, 2012 14:10 To: alac-announce@atlarge-lists.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=alac-announce@atlarge-lists.ic...> ; 'Afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=Afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.ica...> '; APRALO; of debate for At-Large Europe LACRALO discussion list; 'lac-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=lac-discuss@atlarge-lists.ican...> '; NARALO discussion list CC: 'Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond "," Cheryl Langdon-Orr, ICANN At-Large Staff Subject: Comments Requested: Proposal for At-Large Vision Statement Dear All, The improvements ALAC Review Working Group Final Report includes a recommendation that "The ALAC should develop strategic planning and operational (Including the performance criteria and cost information) as part of ICANN planning process. "(Recommendation No. 5 < https://community.icann.org/display/Improve/Recommendation+5> As part of implementing this recommendation, the At-Large Improved performance of the work of the team created a C action item to "Joint ALAC and At-Large of the vision and mission." Improvements At-Large working group developed a proposal for At-Large Vision Declaration during their meeting at the 43rd ICANN meeting in Costa Rica. The proposed At-Large Vision Statement is: . The community of ALAC and At Large-catalyzes and facilitates inclusive and meaningful participation of Internet end-users worldwide, added to its input and adds his voice to be in all matters of ICANN. Olivier Crepin-Leblond, President of the ALAC, and Cheryl Langdon-Orr, president of improvements in At-Large working group, have outlined the next steps for the proposed Vision Statement At-Large: . May 4 to 17, 2012 - The proposed At-Large vision statement is open comment 4 to May 17, 2012. Please use the comment feature on this wiki page < https://community.icann.org/x/esPbAQ> Send your comments to At-Large Staff: staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> . . May 21, 2012 - Improvements At-Large working group will review and incorporate comments received at its meeting on May 21. May 22 2012 - The ALAC review the proposed At-Large Vision Declaration during their meeting of May 22, ALAC and the vote is to ratify it. Regards, Heidi Ullrich, Silvia Vivanco, Matt Ashtiani, Gisela Gruber, and Nathalie Peregrine ICANN staff policy in support of ALAC E-mail: staff@atlarge.icann.org <http://us.mc1120.mail.yahoo.com/mc/compose?to=staff@atlarge.icann.org> _______________________________________________ [[--Original text (es) http://mm.icann.org/transbot_archive/25b3ce30be.html --]]