Hi,

this statement should not be ratified "as is"; instead, the following (at least) should be submitted: 

1. the review must be performed including as reviewers parties designated by processes independent of all SO's and AC's. The vetting process through the SO's and AC's in the recent years (since it was instituted) has given rise to more insidership than ever and this in turn has weakened the reviews to the point of making some of them unworkable. The Board must be at freedom to designate external members. 

2. The paragraph on "consideration of how the review reviews AC's and SO's should be omitted. ALL of ICANN should be reviewed with the same level of rigorous evaluation. THAT is what "HOLISTIC" means.

3. The objectives of the review must include "simplification of all ICANN processes to the utmost achievable level" lest it end up, as the previous ATRT's (we already have three!!), in more bureaucracy and more make-work.

Yours,

Alejandro Pisanty

On Mon, Oct 10, 2022 at 9:54 AM Claire Craig <claireccraig@gmail.com> wrote:

Please review the Draft LACRALO position on the Pilot Holistic Review and provide your comments and feed. It would be appreciated if you can send today as a matter of urgency.

On Fri, 7 Oct 2022 at 12:16, <silvia.vivanco@icann.org> wrote:

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Estimados,

 Consulte el documento de Google: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12kNCFCBca63eeAZbgBvvVXNLsFGbOUxzWc229o22gJY/edit [docs.google.com] <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/docs.google.com/document/d/12kNCFCBca63eeAZbgBvvVXNLsFGbOUxzWc229o22gJY/edit__;!!PtGJab4!_J_lDzHTX0_2GLc4My8k5wuVllw5bZkD6zyEZP1sfuhaDnkQtR4cSQzKwiItZCHi7sXu-dU6WgDxQ51N3Ais3jlaa1kbXQ$> con el borrador de la declaración del ALAC sobre los TOR de revisión holística. Nota: Los comentarios de importancia crítica solo se aceptarán hasta las 23:59 UTC del 11 de octubre de 2022.

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