Hi Mats,
I have made a small tweak to the wording of Inclusion Principle #1: from "may be exceptionally included in a case where..." to "may be included in special cases where..." (Phrasing that as "in exceptional cases" would also work, if you prefer.)
I deleted Inclusion Principle #8, since it was blank.
I rephrased Exclusion Principle #4, so that it is phrased the same way as the other Exclusion Principles.
Otherwise, yes we are good to go. Sorry for not getting back to you sooner.
Bill Jouris
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From: Mats Dufberg <mats.dufberg@iis.se>
To: Bill Jouris <bill.jouris@insidethestack.com>
Cc: "LatinGP@icann.org" <LatinGP@icann.org>; Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo@icann.org>
Sent: Monday, September 11, 2017 8:11 AM
Subject: Re: [Latingp] Summary of Latin GP Repertoire WG Meeting on 29 August 2017
Bill,
I think you have done the native speaker inspection of the text, haven't you? If so, the action item below could be ticked.
Yours,
Mats
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From: <latingp-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Pitinan Kooarmornpatana <pitinan.koo@icann.org>
Date: Thursday 7 September 2017 at 11:58
To: "LatinGP@icann.org" <LatinGP@icann.org>
Subject: [Latingp] Summary of Latin GP Repertoire WG Meeting on 29 August 2017
Dear Latin GP members,
Please find attached the summary of the meeting of the Latin GP Repertoire WG Meeting held on 29 August 2017. Please let us know if you would like to suggest any edits or additions.
Action Item:
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S. No.
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Action Items
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Owner
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1
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Conduct the grammatical review and finalize the Principles for Developing the Repertoire as discussed by the WG
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BJ, MD
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The recording and this summary are also posted at the Latin GP wiki page at
Regards,
Pitinan